Am I a talented author?

Question

Am I a talented author?
quotThere we were, all alone, without any gossiping witnesses to condemn us for our actions. The sun engulfed us with a warmth and a hungeran aura so overwhelming that I could feel my skin melting and my blood boiling. I wanted him so badlyand he was all I could think of.

Answer

I think this is a cliched paragraph. Lesser originality. You are approaching the old scene in the old way. SInce you cant change the scene , it is recommended to change the approach.brAnd if I am to decide on talent, cliches are really not a good parameter. This is you, trying to be like someone else. Be YOURSELF. And then lets decide. I think you will have more potential than this.brbrTW K