Am I a talented author?

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Am I a talented author?
quotThere we were, all alone, without any gossiping witnesses to condemn us for our actions. The sun engulfed us with a warmth and a hungeran aura so overwhelming that I could feel my skin melting and my blood boiling. I wanted him so badlyand he was all I could think of.

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I think this is a cliched paragraph. Lesser originality. You are approaching the old scene in the old way. SInce you cant change the scene , it is recommended to change the approach.brAnd if I am to decide on talent, cliches are really not a good parameter. This is you, trying to be like someone else. Be YOURSELF. And then lets decide. I think you will have more potential than this.brbrTW K

Alternate word for I Love you?

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Alternate word for I Love you?
your creative.

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There are as many ways to say quotI love youquot as there are people to love.brbrFor the French, its Je taime pronounced zhetomm, and in the Phillipines its quotMahal ka taquot. Those hot blooded Italians whisper quotti amoquot in their lovers ear, while the Chinese are lilting quotwo ie niquot.brbrIf you were being more poetic, you could tell your love she quotwalks in beauty like the nightquot, or turn to your Shakespeare and ask quothow do I love thee, let me count the waysquot and extol her virtues long into the night.brbrShould you be early risers, you could sit with her while the sun comes up and whisper quotI love you more than the sun loves the dawnquot while holding her in your arms.brbrWhen it comes time for a special occasion and she wonders what to get you, you can tell her you dont need any gifts because shes all youve ever wanted.brbrMore than words, though, you can give your love through the little things you do. You could give her a flower for no reason and when she asks why, tell her it was for the pleasure of seeing her smile. Its sitting and listening without needing to judge what shes telling you after shes had a bad day. It could be as romantic as a scented bath by candle light, or as simple and every day as settling in by her and massaging her feet when shes tired.brbrBut you know... my favorite way of all time of telling someone how much I love them has to come from Winnie the PoohbrbrquotIf you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you.quotbrbrAnd if you just wanted to, give her a Winnie the Pooh teddy bear holding a card that says only that inside, and see what she does.